Looks like a good start. The legs are too cylindrical at the moment, they need to have a more chopped/gnarled look. IMO the vertical parts of the back on the chair are too thick, like the legs just goes on and up. It may be what you're aiming for though :o) Perhaps also make the boards on the table more rough. I don't know wings, in Max I would add a noise modifier to it. I really like your roach kebab :o) Make more strange/icky food and it might be a selling parameter. There are lots of similar free furniture around, so you got to find something special in order to sell it. The strange food just migh be IT! :o) Good luck with it, wether it's for sale or free.

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