You know? I think this is pretty damn good. I'd do a full high-rez render just to see that dress. I think it's gonna come out ok....! As for cracks in the glass....you might be able to do something in the T.E. or overlay a streak of lightning on the domes.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...