The ventian blinds need a box at the top for the operating strings. The bathroom wall needs to be thickened - it looks as thin as cardboard. The desklamp needs a bulb. The pillows on the bed look like fried eggs. Nice pic all told, but the lighting is very flat.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...