Questions of these types sometimes get opinionated answers. Meaning, they are subject to what the viewer prefers. So, it doesn't mean the artist is wrong...just that a viewer differs in opinon. So, for me, the first thing I thought was that I thought it was too yellow. I suppose that is for a purpose...a southwestern sort of look. I also think the background is too similar in color to the foreground. Should be more separation, in my opinion. But, it's just an opinon. Follow the beat of your own drums.