Ah, but sinister can be sexy too! Which is part of Snape's considerable appeal -- they don't call him the Slytherin Sex God for nothing. His chin's better in this version, as is the nose. You're much closer now, I think. Haven't done AU? Why not give it a try it some time, it's fun, really. I've even seen a couple stories around with a winged Snape (not by me, someone else thought of that first and paired him up with -- heck, IM me for the details 'cuz if I say it here I'll probably cause a riot) and he certainly does have a "you know" unlike poor Metatron ;-)