I think you have very good composition. I especially like the placement of the rocks on the right side. Tradivoro is correct about the use of lights. Even though the light is coming from behind the figures, you need to light them from the front side, so they can be seen. Of course, that's not realistic, but has to be done for the 'eye' of the viewer. My suggestion is to delete the lens flares. Personally, I don't use them, because they suggest that the picture is taken with a camera, since flares are reflections. Plus for me, they just make the final picture too busy. Hope that helps some. Good job with your image! Denny