Yep this works for me, nice shutter speed and good compo with adequate lighting. As I know you like to get critique I would add, and this is my opinion and not everyone will agree with me on this. It may be worth considering flipping the image horizontally, thus making the diagonal run form left to right, this comment coming from the fact that we (in most cases) read from left to right and by habit our eye is drawn to the left of an image automatically, the diagonal composition then draws your eye through the frame. Maybe I have opened a can of worms but it is just my personal perception and observation. As for the lighting, these scenes need to be shot in low light so colour saturation is compromised to obtain the long exposure. The lighting in this is nice and even. LP

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