I agree about the text, and also another small (very small) critique: the corners of the rectangles engraved into the wall look a bit odd. You can get rounded corners, instead of that strange x-intersection, by shortening the length of each of the cylinders by the width of the cylinders, then placing a sphere that's the same as the width of the cylinders in x, y, and z at each of the corners. Does that make sense? Other than that I think it looks really cool, I can't wait to see it textured! How big is this thing, anyway? There's a thing on the wall that looks like a handle, but it looks like there's a hand railing around the machine.