I think it's an excellent start and finish! That's the great thing about Bryce...so many ways to skin that cat! You're the creator... how far do you want to take it? It definately gets those creative juices flowing. The only thing that I would suggest is try to create a simple mood (as fredramsey suggests) and/or movement within the picture. Keep Bryceing! You'll get that "happy fuzzy" feeling when it works for you!