I think that i like the POV better in the second one, but since we're not working backwards... The dragon should be bigger. Unless you intend for it to be an adolescent, which the Millenium Dragon is not really a teenager. It would create a more dramatic sense of scale... Honestly, aside from what ICM said, I think the image would be more appealing if you just flipped it. Horizontally, you know? Mirror it, and take a look... It draws your eyes along it's elements in a much smoother way.