Satan's chubby does seem a bit gratuitous, though I suppose does clarify that he's not after her soul. Is there some meaning or symbolism in her wearing high heels? At any rate, the mix of sex and religion gurantees that you'll probably get few if any comments on any artistic merit your image may have--and probably few comments at all since it'll likely be pulled. Unless you simply want to stir up Hell's fires here in the forums then I'd say at least lose Lucifer's package and put some heavenly undies on Angel Girl.

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