yes, Kendra! See, while I don't mind seeing all the "wow, that's great, you are soooo amazing and talented and luv you" stuff, I do mind the "bah -- it sucks" stuff (aside from being pretty out of bounds given that little admonition right there, lol). As for a critique of a 5 year olds work, well, one does have to take the subject matter into hand. I am running into one issue, though. I'm sorta looking at some of the work of those who reply here. There is one who's work is very beautiful, and I'm certain there are things to improve on it, but I don't know enough of the subject matter to effectively comment. May have to learn a little here myself ;)

thou and I, my friend, can, in the most flunkey world, make, each of us, one non-flunkey, one hero, if we like: that will be two heroes to begin with. (Carlyle)