ok. The flash is making it difficult for navigation of the site, so I need to know if you have put the image up here in the galleries (assuming you can). also, it would be somewhat lengthy. Your design strengths are satisfactory, but your compositional skills need some work. I have some ideas, but to really be able to illustrate them effectively, I would need to focus on a specific image which is still fairly fresh to you creatively, that you could go in and look at while referencing my comments.

thou and I, my friend, can, in the most flunkey world, make, each of us, one non-flunkey, one hero, if we like: that will be two heroes to begin with. (Carlyle)