Monika I think these look great - You are more expert than I, so no suggestions perhaps others maybe be able to help more :)
My only reservation would be about number 10 because of the pose - the lady center/right looks like she has one arm shorter than the other.

Richard.

Message edited on: 01/19/2005 10:41

And every one said, 'If we only live,
We too will go to sea in a Sieve,---
To the hills of the Chankly Bore!'
Far and few, far and few, Are the lands where the Jumblies live;
Their heads are green, and their hands are blue, And they went to sea in a Sieve.

Edward Lear
http://www.nonsenselit.org/Lear/ns/jumblies.html