I'll be honest with you, i have never tried anything like this nor do i think i ever will. The reason for it is because of the errors i picked in yours.

#1 remove the human figure and replace it with a female that doesn't look to cartoonish.

#2 don't put wings on the human

#3 The unicorn doesn't seem to fit the scene to well, if it is ment to be close to the human figure then it should be larger.

#4 make sure when you place a human in it you place the feet on the ground not just above it where a shadow can form under them.

Ok i did say i have never done anything like this and you wanted honest comments..sorry if i offend you with mine.

Message edited on: 01/23/2005 00:47

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