I like it... might try different lighting perhaps? Something about the color and glare of the lights that doesn't seem to be working... maybe a softer light with a yellow-white tint. Bring the image to a wider document size and add some office stuff, and mabey a potted plant off to one side [being careful about keeping the image focus], and you have a winner here. Nice work.

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• Monkeysmell