Hey that looks a lot better now. You know one thing i might suggest is that you track the main character with the camera so that the background is motion-blurred but the character is sharp. With the subtle blur you have created it actually seems like a DOF focus effect and draws your eye more to the background. The feel of speed and movement could still be conveyed by the blurring of the background whilst remaining a sharp focus on the most important part of the scene. I think it is a very good picture, i realy like those grass textures in the background.