Looks like it is headed in the right direction. Two thoughts: - I think I'd try darkening the sky. The hills have a really nice effect going but the brightness of the sky matches the main characters too closely. - The interaction between the characters and the environment seems shaky...the bottom front of the dress looks like it overrides some of the grass that it should appear to be behind...but more importantly there doesn't appear to be any shadows. The woman in particular looks fairly front lit so I would expect a bit of shadow on the grass. I like this in comparison to the first one though. Nice work!