Bandolin & Hythshade: I agree with both of you completly! My comments were meant to be helpful and not an attack on artistic license. Of course you are free do make what you will of LOTR, I just wasn't sure what you (Hythshade)wanted to achieve. Good luck with the piece. I look forward to your revision.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...