I think it's great! Like she just popped into the frame with enough of here face showing as not to distract from the image. Many pro head shots are cropped extremely tight Also the DOP adds to this image giving a slight illusion of motion. As for "show-able" half the stuff I post probably isn't considered show-able, so you might want to get some more opinions. One more thing there are a few things I would touch up and soften on her face before showing it IMHO:}