hmmm - imo, there's nothing wrong with the gall or her position.... the blurred trees popping out of her head on the left need to go though.
My eyes naturally start on her face, work left to the highlights of her hair, follow it in to the darker bits.... then into blurry branches.

Her face is cool and the position is good - it's not the norm, obviously, but that's what adds the feeling of spontaniety(sp?). Well, for me anyhow.

(",) btw, her eyes are captivating.... say "Hi" from Mikey winks

Message edited on: 03/11/2005 16:41