Looking much better. Only ever use white light to get the realism right - then adjust for effect. Her skin still looks like it doesn't quite have enough red, and has a fraction too much blue. Switching shadows on will help with the realism too (will keep the light out of her eyes and nostrils. The main things to work on now are her lips (there is a harsh border between her lips and skin where the highlights change), and her eyes (which are maybe a bit bright compared with ehr skin?).

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