it's a beautiful photo, Gun!!!! i don't have any advice to give you. but from what i've seen in your gallery, you DO do magic as Cindy says!!!! and i remember your portraits are just incredible!!!!!! just do your thing girl!!!!! Do you ever use Painter??? might be neat to play around with this image and see what you can do? but really Gun, i find it beautiful just the way it is! His face is so full of expression...he's so deep in thought...and love the lighting on his hair. sorry i can't give you technical advice sweet lady. but just keep practicing and shooting. it takes a lot time for me to learn my cam. got it in Jan. and i read a bit every day. practice almost every day. enjoy the sun, lady!!!!