Kemal opened this issue on Apr 09, 2005 ยท 20 posts
Quest posted Sat, 09 April 2005 at 6:49 PM
Kemal, this is fantastic! A few things here: Shouldnt that shadow on the wall be further to the left of the lamp? If you follow the light reflecting off the front of the lamp and how in lines up with the light coming in through the window, it doesnt seem to line up with the shadow on the wall. The way it is now, at that angle you shouldnt be able to see as much of the lamp shade on the wall. I think I see light rays streaming across the image but it doesnt seem to line up with the visible window but a second, unseen widow towards its right is inferred. I see the inferred windows light reflection on the floor, so maybe the rays should go beyond the right side of the visible window to indicate theres were the light rays are coming from. I agree that the colors should be a bit more intense, maybe the haze is up a little too high? And as a side note, I have blinds and none are bent, but then, I could be anal that way. Maybe the rustled hint of a small area rug would suffice in place of bent blinds. Nice work!