Post #1 First Paragraph "Today we have made some strides in to return to recycling materials' Try "Today we have made some strides in returning to recycling materials," Post #2 Second Paragraph, second line... "but lets ponder what else might be possible" lets should be let's -Technically, I guess since this is a voice over this one may not really matter but anyway- This is just at first glance. Looks like it is coming along pretty good.