Thanx Japes. I'm really counting on the gracious way you guys correct my mangling of the English language and the support you are giving me.

Even though it is a voice over, it is better for it to be as perfect as possible so that the narrator doesn't look and say to them self "...this guys an idiot for certain."

Little things like proper punctuation can go a long way in the opinion polls. It's hard enough for me to overcome the first impression caused by appearance, "This guy looks like he's better suited to pushing a cart and dumpster diving, than he does pushing an agenda..."

Yank My Doodle, It's a Dandy!