Forum: Writers


Subject: Voice Over Narration WIP II continued

cryptojoe opened this issue on Apr 13, 2005 ยท 16 posts


cryptojoe posted Fri, 15 April 2005 at 4:28 AM

Okay, I'm in deep Kim Chee now! My closing is looking more like a cliamx to a sermon (and I don't mean because of the biblical quotes either) that ends with a Mechevellian Cabal of Byzantine Intrigue. I have this problem that when I get on a roll I don't know how to stop.

The wife even bought me a T-Shirt once that said:

"Help. I'm talking and I can't shut up!"

Yank My Doodle, It's a Dandy!