Forum: Writers


Subject: Voice Over Narration WIP II continued

cryptojoe opened this issue on Apr 13, 2005 ยท 16 posts


cryptojoe posted Fri, 15 April 2005 at 5:10 AM

midrael:(a.k.a. David L), or anyone else for that matter; I really need allot of work on this part man. Please understand, I have some difficulties keeping things straight in my head sometimes and this is one of them.

I'm not wealthy. My father recently passed away and I am using what little life insurance he left to me to pay for this. In return for divulging this solution I ask in return; nothing. I hope to gain enough notoriety to fund my private research in electrical generation. But, if I get not one dime, I have fulfilled the promise I made to God and myself to give one last try, to leave the world a better place than what I was born into.

I have invited Senators, Congresscritters, Engineers of Automotive Industries and Civil Engineers as well to come to this meeting and see this presentation. It even includes a free lunch!

I need some help here. Some, hell, allot! Somebody please bail me out and rewrite this closing so that it doesn't turn out too inflammatory.

All I can promise in return for your services is credits on the DVD/CD that will be produced; under the title of "Writers" and a copy of your own mailed to you.

I'm willing to risk what little I own because, to parody Martin Luther King,

"I have a Pipe Dream!"

Yank My Doodle, It's a Dandy!