Forum: Writers


Subject: Voice Over Narration WIP II continued

cryptojoe opened this issue on Apr 13, 2005 ยท 16 posts


japes posted Mon, 18 April 2005 at 8:15 AM

This is much better. Very easy read compared to what you had before. A few commas and such are missing but Very well done. I will give it an editory look at lunch time.