Canis, You may receive the comments and suggestions you're seeking more often, if you say "Constructive critique encourage" or "Please help me improve this" or something like that in the text. People can and do give suggestions, help and critique here, but unfortunately we tend to be overwhelmed by the people who only give praise.

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"you are terrifying
and strange and beautiful
something not everyone knows how to love." - Warsan Shire