I'm not really qualified to comment, (but s*ddit, I'll try..) As I first viewed this my eye scannned the (very impressive) windows, hovered for a while over the figure, thought "drat! Not nude - ignore it" (but then remembered that this is a WIP), then followed the line back left to the rock.... ROCK?? What's a rock doing there?? Aahhh.., it's not a rock, it's a cushion... (but it took me a second or 2 to realise that...) But it needs the shadows darkened under it...:-) Afterwards I saw the unfinished bit on the right, but expect that that will be sorted later.. Also, the "rock" behind the figure should also have more shadow below it (there's always a dark shadow under cushions, they project it themselves, part of cushion culture, vol 3, section 2.:-)) ) Cheers, Diolma (And I expect you were going to address that anyway..)