Hey Sheila, Hmmm... Without knowing what's in your "minds eye" or what your tryin to get across, I can't really "GET IT"! The clouds are nice, but this image just doesn't have ooomph! (my technical term). Its seems to be missing "something" What that is...I can't say! I almost feel like this should have been shot holdin the cam horizontal...instead of vertical! Seems too tight! Was that post(birdhouse perhaps) you focal point?