The hair and the eyes are lovely. The neck is monotonous, why all strokes going the same direction and same size more or less? Especialy the cheek in shadow? The background is great on our left but flat and weak on our right. Forehaed very nice but green edge transition between her left shoulder and the background doesn't work for me. Painting with concentrick brush strokes might be nice. And more randomness in hue. Lighten shadow on hair our left since in painting people general supress shading shadows to some extent. More shading to express volume of her left cheek? Straight render has nice texture and pose but is not so interesting to me. Paint render is nice, especialy the eyes. I do nearly only digital paintings from renders but I do not post here as there is no interest. InDepth forum (URL I forget) was more interested in digital painting from Poser and otherwise. Personaly I am more interested in such "painted" poser work than the straight stuff. Thanks for showing.