Leo, I would suggest we move this thread to the writers forum, where people with language skills can assist you more with your endeavors.

I'm really terrible with English and it's my primary language; however I can see some grammatical errors.

We all wish you the best man! You're a great kid and a wonderful member who is always helpful to those of us who are less skilled that you are. So, I think if I did not make the offer to move the thread I would be doing you a disservice.

Joe

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