1eo opened this issue on Jun 08, 2005 ยท 12 posts
1eo posted Thu, 09 June 2005 at 1:36 PM
dialyn, Midrael was referring to a specific part on my resume where I was describing a particular job that I did.
Out of context your sentence makes a lot more sense, but once is place in the paragraph... midrael's sentence makes more sense. (I think :P or no?)
BTW someone else corrected the same sentence and told me it's "on" instead of "in" = "Working on a very tight schedule" which one is right...
They also told me avoid using the word "I".. ouch!
I'll post another draft soon
Regards,
Leonardo
Message edited on: 06/09/2005 13:38