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Subject: Still WIP - Film noir detective office

ratracer opened this issue on Jun 27, 2005 ยท 25 posts


Moebius87 posted Mon, 27 June 2005 at 11:40 AM

I've stared... stared... and stared at this and was really trying to visualize would could possibly be added to improve on this. And, I had a hard time thinking of something...

Perhaps a different style of telephone as an alternative prop... something more 50's? Those black handsets with the big imposing lump on the desk with the rotary dial. What about a banker's lamp... you know those ones with the deep green glass shades and the little pull chain? Then how about a leather desk blotter... something to hide that important bit of evidence underneath?

The legs on the water cooler look a bit spindly... and perhaps you could use one of those slow moving ceiling fans... and of course those patented horizontal blinds! :o)

This is a beautifully detailed and very well thought out set. All you need is a gumshoe, revolver, trench coat and fedora... oh yeah... and that sultry blonde bombshell that would make you think twice about taking the case. :o)

Fantastic stuff! MMessage edited on: 06/27/2005 11:41

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