I like the image of Laura Rose the most. The only improvement I could find is if she lost those damned stupid rings on her face. Jewelry should enhance natural beauty. These detract from it.

She seems a much more intriguing person, more interesting than any of the rest, but those rings scream obscenities at my mind, which detract from her inner beauty and intelligence. They make me wish not to know or try to understand her.

Yank My Doodle, It's a Dandy!