Another cool concept! Here's my thoughts! I think all the "stuff" in the dark there is too much...over crowded! In my mind, it would be cool to see a li'l of the wall under the window...maybe layer a cinder block kinda texture. Only have a bit showing (lit) and some how... sort of spotlight a smaller spider...climbin up it! The other images...seem like hallucinations in ways! The person who's EYES we are seein thru...is goin "stir crazy" (at least to me) I actually like the sky and clouds, adds a great contrast to the darkness! A bird flyin' (symbolizing freedom) and say...a hand/arm reaching out towards the window would be awesome! Again... just my thoughts here...this is the "feelin" I think you are tryin for (IMO) Hope this helps!