Forum: Photography


Subject: Kemal & Sheila business card...feedback wanted. Trying to earn $ at this.

tvernuccio opened this issue on Aug 18, 2005 ยท 25 posts


TwoPynts posted Fri, 19 August 2005 at 9:52 AM

Hey you two...best of luck with this. It is always fun to get new business cards for yourself, and lots of fun to design them, though it can be hard to be objective. You've gotten lots of great advice, especially from Michelle and Doug, so I won't say too much. This is one of the things I do as a graphic designer so I will say I like what you are doing. I do find it a little busy though. You want to make an immeadiate impact with a business card, and I think it could be a little more focused. Often people try to incorporate too much into the card and it hurts the overall design. I would suggest lightening the map in the background, and even the camera a bit more. The two separate cards for 3D and Photo was a good idea...and showing your images is also a thought. I would suggest doing that as opposed to the map as a background. The first photo was my fave as well. The latest design is good, but I wonder about your choice of camera. It does not scream pro to me. Here are some that I've done. I may have done them differently if it were all up to me, but when you work for someone, then you have go by what they want. I could analyze the design all day but you are doing it for you and have to make it the way you want it. I think it works pretty well as such. :)

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