I realize what I don't like about image #1. It's the fact that there is no distinction between the victims head and neck, and the unrealistic straightness between the neck and the shoulders. To be honest it took me a couple of minutes to figure out that that was supposed to be a person and the only reason I did put it together is because of the vampire and the bloody teeth which caused me to look closer and I saw an ear.

Perhaps some hair on the head of the victim, maybe a different angle that shows some of his face...

Message edited on: 08/27/2005 06:48

"It is good to see ourselves as others see us. Try as we may, we are never
able to know ourselves fully as we are, especially the evil side of us.
This we can do only if we are not angry with our critics but will take in good
heart whatever they might have to say." - Ghandi