Forum: Writers


Subject: September Challenge Commenting Thread

dido6 opened this issue on Sep 06, 2005 ยท 28 posts


garblesnix posted Tue, 13 September 2005 at 6:38 PM

Thoroughly enjoyable. Similar in tone to a Ken Burns story. Nice short, descriptive sentences, spoken as a child would speak them. I felt the child's need for things to work. A well paced emotional roller-coaster.