Hey there. I think you should get rid of that snap to the right at the begining of the clip. It's too sudden and it feels weird to have the character do that snap at the start of the clip. That gesturing when she says "if women really..." is a good idea, but it seems it's not powerful enough. Maybe if she closed her fist or threw one finger up as in saying "one" maybe it would look better. Other than that, it's a very good start :)

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