Greetings all, just wanted to put my few cents worth in. Entry #1 is fantastic. A completely fresh POV. Well done. Nice simple writing that was a pleasure to read. I agree with Susan and ask for more. Entry #2 didn't grab me unfortunately. Even so I plodded through to read it. There were some evidence of good humor and fantastic imagery but on the whole a bit to 'busy'. Just my humble opinion though. David - Are the gliches sorted out or did one of the submissions not make the standard? Come on people, submit your writings......

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