Generally I like it. Very nice result. I have to be honest with you, I am not so enthusiast about making cartoon looks with 3D apps. From my personal point of view that's what 2D animation is for, not 3D... same reason why you never see me doing cell shadings ;) Anyway... I still admire what you've come up with, specially considering how much work it takes to get it to look like that. Just an observation. Is there a way you can get that contour on everything? It serves to separate the characters from the background but the lack of contour inside the characters makes them look weird. For example the shirt's collar seems to 'blend' with the character's neck.

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