Great scene, great pov! A couple of things come to mind though. The bullets holes in the Spit's wing are too small and the Spit had 8 guns, all of them mounted IN the wings and not slung beneath. (Slaps Bazze over the back of the head with a wet kipper)

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...