"I was looking for feedback on timing and feel. So you saw everything. :)" Ok, well... in that case, I think the first shot over the water lasts a little long. I think the ship should come into view a little sooner, or perhaps your first title card should be shown a few seconds sooner. You have roughly 16 seconds of showing nothing but water going by, which I think is slightly prolonged. Other than that, it seems fine. I don't use Premiere anymore either, so no idea what the problem could be there.

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Tools :  3dsmax 2015, Daz Studio 4.6, PoserPro 2012, Blender v2.74

System: Pentium QuadCore i7, under Win 8, GeForce GTX 780 / 2GB GPU.