Hello there First of all, very original concept. It's good to see something different from time to time. What did you use to make the song? As for my crits: I think you should keep an eye on your feet. They slide a lot and that makes me think she's gonna fall any minute. Also check your balance. I also think you could change your timing in some parts ;) Keep it up.

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