Margana opened this issue on Nov 14, 2005 ยท 18 posts
tvernuccio posted Tue, 15 November 2005 at 12:16 AM
Marlene, Paige looks absolutely STUNNING!!!! Wow!!! i would like to give you some feedback on that first image, Marlene. First thing when i looked at that, i thought Paige's face was a mask. Her jawline is so sharp and looks like it's been over-softened in PS. The lighting/harsh shadows makes it look like she has no neck. Also looks like there's a lot of noise there on her neck area. the other thing i notice about that first photo is her hair is blurry. Also, there's no details visible on the feathers on her jacket. Actually, there's no details visible on much of her clothes at all. Also, i see several white spots on Paige's clothes. two of them are in the curve of her left elbow. the other one is about an inch above her hands. the last one is on her bra. the b/w tones don't seem right either. i think there's too much green in them. The 2nd image...i notice a square patch on her forehead. dunno what that is. In that patch her skin tones are lighter. the rest of her forehead looks like it has too much red. i would try to decrease that. her arm is the same way. i see reddish/pinkish vertical lines running up and down her arm. also focus is soft. well, that's what i notice. but probably people will just notice that Paige is drop-dead gorgeous!!!!! :) I'd be more than happy to play with these images and see what i can do, but i would need the original images and not the Photo-shopped ones. As for model releases...yep...next time she agrees to model for someone, she needs to make sure there's a release signed. Huge congrats to Paige!!!! ;) I understand why you're so proud!!!! :)