I like the overall feel of it, although she may be a bit overdressed for the occasion. I did notice that at about 23-25 seconds into the movie you have a shot of her where the camera starts level with her, starts to orbit on the Y-axis and then suddenly moves up to an overhead shot looking down in front of her. That movement feels a little rough - specifically when the secondary orbit starts it seems to just jump to the upper position looking down. I like the move - I'd just suggest smoothing it out a bit more. Very nice particles! Finally, I don't know what'd coming before this but I'd make sure that her ship is seen and it's in a location that she can reach before the spit hits the fan.

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