Cool! Some really good effects you have in this version. The explosion looks extremely impressive! Just one thing I noticed in this version that you might want to consider: nothing major, but in the shot where she's examining that sphere in her hand, she puts it back down to her side, and there's an abrupt forward movement of her arm at the very end of the movement that looks unnatural. It's just a small "twitch" that occurs as the scene is transitioning into the next one. Simply cutting off one or two frames from the end of that scene should correct it. Again, it's something minor in my opinion, but a critical eye will pick up on it. I think you have improved some of the weak spots in the shot where she's rubbing the back of her neck. It looks more natural now I think, and I love the shot of the ship flying away from the mushroom cloud! Keep us posted as you make progress here! This is really looking awesome! Are you working on this yourself, or do you have help?